The rise of the three kingdoms: The kingdom of Light

The Angel opened his eyes in his giant eagle-like form and saw that the world regained its colours. He looked upon the horizon and saw the lands. It was a cloudless day around noon, he was standing at the top of the highest mountain. He could see from the middle to the right, were the 2 greatest rivers converged, a vast land covered by a black rotting soil, grey clouds that seemed to disperse as soon as the got out of that territory and swamps that were once blue lakes, rotten . To the left, was were the dragon fell, a huge area destroyed by the rain of fire, sharp mountains rised, and even though some of those mountains were constantly spitting fire there was a dense forest taking over every spot that wasn't filled with lava. Even those rocky parts. Around the mountain were he was standing there was wide open plains with a very green grass up to a small much greener forest that surrounded the plains. He of course liked this side. It had more variety of colours. It looked more alive. All this three areas where separated by two converging huge rivers and in the middle was a big delta that marked the center of the lands.

Then he realized that where he was standing a few meters away were some weird shaped stones, they weren't very natural and he never saw stones like that. When he looked closer to one of those stones he saw his shape on the stone, his heart stopped for a moment. How? What? Stones aren't supposed to change shape. What was that? There were a lot of stones with his shape. Some were identical some had his atributtes in a sort of exagerated way. But it was him. Something must have done this. He was sure rocks don't change shape.

He spread his wings and went down the mountain. Soon he saw a human village at the bottom of the mountain. They had this weird houses and smoke came out in some of those houses. He couldn't understand. How could they do that? How much time was he meditating?

He landed in the middle of the village. People started gathering as soon as he landed. They were looking at him with big eyes. They yelled calling more of them. Everyone gathered in the center of the village and remained silent for a couple of seconds. The vowed chanting some sort of ritual. He didn't understand anything but they didn't seem aggresive. They looked amazed by him. Then, from the weirdest of the huts came out a very old man. White long hair, skinny, he had a lot of shinny colourful things around his neck and arms, me moved slowly towards him, with a long walking stick with even more things that made noise in every step he took. He approached and looked at him.

Old man: "You are our savior, the messenger of God"

Yet he did not move his lips.

The Angel: "How come you can talk to me?"
Old Man: "I can read souls, and yours is a very loud and powerful one. I read how you saved us. I heard your prayers. We owe you"
The Angel: "Fool. You owe me nothing. It was because of me that life in this planet was threaten"
Old Man: "I know. But still you saved us. Even if it was from yourself. Your love and misericordy for this world is what proves that you were sent by the Great One"

The Angel stood there staring at the people and the old man. These people. They recognized his work. They forgave his mistake. They loved him. He didn't feel this from any other creature. Except for his wings and eyes, that he liked very much, he took the shape of a human. Short blond hair, fit and young, caucasian and a bit taller than the ones in the village. He kept that shape to live among the humans and learn from them. And the humans learnt from him. Learning concepts was his favorite. Honor, justice, devotion, among others were the ones that made him feel at peace. Other concepts like hate, malice, egoism he wasn't agree but he knew those would never cease existing. He thought it would be better for those kind of feelings to be reduced as much as people can so peace could last longer.

Once he learnt he taught. Specially to the kids. So they could grow into adults that serve the peace in those lands.


Among the villages in that side of the delta war and combat was reduced. People were unified by the adoration to this winged Mesiah. From time to time the Angel went to meditate to the mountain peek where he always meditated. People slowly gathered near him. They built a huge city first around the bottom of the mountain, and then as the space was less they city grew to the top of the mountain. They built the city with the colors that surrounded the mountain. Living green at the bottom and very snow white colour at the top. Where the angel prayed at the very top of the mountain there was a big temple with a long pointy roof that served as a solar clock in adoration for the favor the Angel did for the living. It represented the love for the Sun and the time the Angel was giving to them by maintaining it alive. Near the mountain where the soil was more rich farms covered the land.

They had almost no enemies. Except for some thief guilds or roaming barbarians from far away lands. Security was important. Soon appeared knights and paladins congregations that served the kingdom in order to maintain the peace. They were the finest examples of the Angel's teachings. Then above them there were the elders. The ones that were able to talk directly with the Angel and comprehend more accurately the Angel's teachings.

As expected, he soon was leader. Not because he desired it but because they desired it. He accepted only because he thought he could unite the people and conflicts will be reduced. He was the lord of the kingdom of light, were the living green surrounded the green and white city that reached the skies. On the top, inside the the temple was his throne. The throne of heaven where he meditated and ruled one third of the lands.


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MAL DIA HOY DIOS MIO
mi ipod se desconfiguro y me desperte una hora tarde
no habia electricidad y no habia agua caliente y no me bañe
me olvide mi campera de porqueria
me llovio
y por algun motivo todos los jefes estaban por ahi mirandome llegar tarde.

cada correccion q hagan yo les voy a dar puntos y el q tenga mas puntos gana :D
los q no figuran apareceran cuando tengan mas de cero puntos


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